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Three living predestination to burst away come such as breeze it review 《the good luck gathers good luck to spread 》
At fresh breeze strength grass this text in, two leading roles are too perfect, with go to reader all can look upwards them, but walk not go into their state and feeling.This isn't good, looked too perfect in the end is also a kind of blemish.I a little bit a little bit for a while old version and original of contents, felling modification later on of the contents incline to more on the writing extravagant, is still an old trouble in depicting of person and drawing up of details can not overcome.
After seeing 《limitless 》 , the many people wants to scold at gorgeous of peculiar scene after, greatly director give some we are blurred and drag along details of Ta.Is it the 《limitless 》 inside that didn't write thing?Not yes, just reader and audience a spoil to appreciate the story that can from beginning to end make sense up, make reference to bottom to hurt a plait story up, to that kind of can the idea will can not talk to spread of thing, definite let the life fear in the book, and is hard to get into.
《The good luck gathers good luck to spread 》 is also similar.Take into a scene for ending story for us from the beginning of story, declare two final outcomes of important host's Mr.s, then again heavy head describe rise.Although this book marks clearly is a traditional knight errant, but I looking at a mostly peculiar work.Say at the knight errant, the knight errant of inside doesn't have a system of integrity, we the person who know an inside fights probably good-looking, the medicine that knows an inside can excel a few China Tuos.In peculiar come to say, this fighting of book is probably too many, Be getting more multifarious too much.The person of handsome United States in book suddenly appears, see the glint and flash of cold steel come and haven't waited to well understand them, next scene appeared again.If this changes into appearance to probably have surprising effect, but writing to say, walk to go into to go in too difficulties.
Is good-looking the book bearing to read very much not only only express on the style of writing, the ancients says effort much outside the poem.Although is some article really the behavior disdain to, the style of writing is lowly such as primary school stranger etc..But some books can really give people some true feelings or those worth touched thing.Say not a little bit better to listenly, make uniform the thing of spirit indiscriminately, this painting probably not very general on the style of writing, but this painting because have no proud over foot, so finally can not keep on seeing.The article is also often similar, don't force oneself walks to the eminence, inevitable go toward to walk low.
Put oneself while writing an article at a what kind of the position is also very important, this writing this details are what you draw ups, still oneself moved a take off to come over from the sky.The ancient times person says an article originally natural, is just that some wonderful pens can living floral person's ability and greatly capture alive the inspiration to the ground just.Write long article this thing, probably at that time good inspiration, after waiting to set down on paper, a little have no.This wants to put down to well give it a bit of thought, re- tidies up an of the structures of the article and re- finds back or discovers lately constantly continuous inspiration.
By the time that the article in 《the good luck gathers good luck to spread 》 just started writing is want the environment bottom of knight errant writes down the love article of a daintiness and wanted to express a rightness of lovers to love each other that kind of the Ping gathered Ping to spread of helpless feeling and pursued persisting of genuine feeling feeling.Just in the center write, let the peculiar scene greatly have chapter heading, too should not.For wear literalness beautiful but pursue a gorgeous feeling, is also should not.
Still make reference to anterior knight errant don't have a knight errant system of integrity and in peculiar the chapter heading fighting Be too many to come up.Mostly know the knight errant of gold Yong, all know that the emergence of person all has much of the system of gang and teacher, the inside is also performance to go a line of way, there is family rules in the door.But those are straightforward but is of person, finally becomes a thou novel dragon in of too many wave sons.Mold at those persons that visit river's lake, have to make them experience an adverse circumstanceses, experience a frustrates, so as to come out human nature vivid description.Will never fill some grounds that is concept and perfect to fill a duck type to the reader with Gao Gao's carriage.Fight too multifariously, make a condition over, behind a condition arrives again.This probably feels a nothing important on the appearance, but on the writing, the reader early spends an eye indiscriminately.Finally such as Piao glasses flower water the month is similar, could not even deliver exclamations.
Also wear a sub-footing at person feelings in the book.
He though longitudinal remarkable talent in the sky,
She though don't be born strange Pa,
But they the too perfect party is finally
Is that the sky envy, the person envies
It's cold to don't experience some kind of bitternesses
How to let plum flower through fragrant?
Don't experience turns and twists good luck to gather good luck to spread
How can love more Mi?
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The good luck gathers good luck to spread
Category:Traditional knight errant| columnist:Fresh breeze strength grass| total 3185 click total 168 recommend| January 19,cheap beats by dre, 2006
[ The contents brief introduction& amp;gt;
He is a longitudinal a sky remarkable talent, she is the strange Pa that doesn't be born, the predestination makes them meet and mutually knows and mutually allows, the but again makes this predestination like water, and the separation and reunion is impermanent.
Was originally two feeling mutually Yue of they, but be always played joke on by the destiny, a few sad joys, how many times left to match, end of whether they can break through all obstacles, again held hands......
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